The red fox

http://youtu.be/dP15zlyra3

In ESOL and in room 7 we watched a video about the fox for our writing. We were looking at good use of verbs and adjectives, not spelling.

Arsh wrote:

There is a hungry red fox trying to find pray it finds a mouse lurking in the snow and he's sensing. He noes that the mouse has stoped and he jumps for the mouse and he gets it and eats it.

We'll done Arsh. Some good descriptive words in the first part of the writing.