We saw lots of animals.
First room11went to the animal farm.
Then we played at the play ground last we played sports like volley ball and cricket. It was on the playground.
When we first got to spencer park we ate morning tea then had a little play.
The thing that I liked was the rabbits.
They were so cute I wanted to touch them.
After that we went to the beach to make sand castles.
But then we had to leave but I had lots of fun.
The end.
Well done Milton, you worked well, stayed on task and finished quickly. Next time you need to put the sentences into paragraphs and start to use some descriptive words, set the scene in the readers mind.
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