Thursday, 17 September 2015

School show

The school show was fun and there were lots of song  and I was playing and making songs with a buckets. By Priyanshu

1 comment:

  1. Good to see you starting to make more complex sentence Priyanshu.
    The school show was fun and there were lots of songs. I was playing and making songs buckets, or you would say with a bucket.
    Try to use "and" less. Start an new sentence or think of another way to say it.

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