Climbing on the fence

Creative writing

The strong wind broke the tree. The branch fell down on the children.Matin and Ahmad had been playing tag. There was a big wind and they heard a big snapping noise. Martin looked up and shouted "Be careful!" But the branch fell too quickly and landed on their heads. Mr Woods came along and chopped up the branches and put them in the skip. He took the boys to the doctor and their mums cried like a baby.

Milton's sentence

The big brave bull chomped down on the green spiky grass. 

The small friendly otter swam quickly in the wet water.

Hehor! The loud smelly donkey was waiting for the noisy happy children  in the giant farm.

Nathan's sentence

Neigh! The big white horse crunched on the fresh grass.

Tasneems sentence

EEuw! The black eels slipped through my hand, it was slimy and yucky like my brothers boogers.

Elahe's sentence

Ahhh! The ugly scary hen was chasing me around I felt like I was running as fast as a plane.it reminded me of playing tag.instead of my friends chasing me a hen was!

ESOL in the garden